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Back in thAmerica didn't have the same civil rights that the white people i.e didn't go in the same public W.C the same school ect as the Jews in Spain
(cela ma semblé interressant je l'ai un peu repris texte en français pui traduit par moi en anglais )Mr. Bush needs a plan fo r reconstitute the power American in the Middle East. He can employ the crisis current in Lebanon and the war continues in Iraq to convince the Americans that wisdom and the need to the time being dictate to him to be in talks with adversaries and enemies, in a step exploiting their power and their weaknesses. To divide Iraq is also an old Israeli dream and t o dissolve Iraq is even more important for America than Syria. In the short run, it is the Iraqi power which constitutes the greatest threat for Israel.Moreover An Iran-Iraq war will tear Iraq and will cause its fall
any species of Pan-Arab conflict will help them and to accelerate the objective to break Iraq in various pieces. It should be said that the elite batiste did not show sufficient clearness to thwart this plan and began in an aggressive adventure, fatal and unjust against the Islamic revolution in Iran. An adventure which deprived the Iraqi people of its sovereignty, its unit and the control of its richness’s. In my mind we can say that the end justifies the means.
 
 
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Le probleme c'est qu'en lisant ton texte on a beaucoup de mal a savoir de quoi ça parle. par exemple la première phrase n'est pas du tout explicite. Qui n'a pas les memes droits que les blancs ?
En plus c'est bourré de fautes de grammaire/orthograhe.  
Essaye de ne pas utiliser les traducteurs automatiques sur le web parce que ça donne ce genre de résultat bizarre dans la tournure des phrases.