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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 20:29:33    

Salouche, Voila donc mon petit texte en anglais !  
 
Si quelqu'un de bien sympatique passe par la et puisse vérifier un peu la syntaxe et la grammaire ; )  
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The choice between create his own business or to be a chief executive for a large multinational is a quite hard choice.
 
According to me and i think in most cases, create is own business is the most exciting choice, and i'm going to tell you why !
 
Who never dreamed to bring his project, his ideas to a successful conclusion in the business creation.
 
Of course the project is not without risk, you have to make market research, you have to anticipate the different difficulties wich could block your way.
That's why when you setlup a business, if you want to succeed, you have to find the litle thing that others don't have, you have to differentiate from competitors, in a way you have to creat your own market.
Furthermore when you create your own business you can take fast decisions which isn't really the case if you work for a big firm.
 
Obviously the task could prove difficult, but the reward could be thousand times the bet, as we can see for exemple with the creators of Google who are now billionaires.
 
But you have to keep your feet firmly planted on the ground and to stay prudent because the failure could have awfull repercussions.
 
So if you'r ready, why not make a try ?
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Voila Merci a ceux qui passe par la ;)
 
Si Corran passe parle la merci d'avance ehhe  :jap:  

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 20:29:33   

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 20:50:53    

Je trouve ça un peu bizzarement tourné mais bon c'est juste MON avis!!!  

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 21:02:44    

ouais, c'est racolo au possible et bourré de fotes:D

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 21:12:29    

slvn a écrit :

ouais, c'est racolo au possible et bourré de fotes:D


 
Oui mais les fautes elles sont ou ? ;)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 21:27:30    

marko a écrit :

Oui mais les fautes elles sont ou ? ;)


 
 
C'est bourrée de fautes :)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 21:38:39    

iGregg a écrit :

C'est bourrée de fautes :)


oui mais ou sont t'elles ? ;)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 21:48:30    

you have to find the litle thing that others don't have dans cette phrase déjà :) .
 
Le reste amuse toi :)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:04:34    

marko a écrit :

Salouche, Voila donc mon petit texte en anglais !  
 
Si quelqu'un de bien sympatique passe par la et puisse vérifier un peu la syntaxe et la grammaire ; )  
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The choice between creating your own business or becoming a chief executive in a global company is a rather hard one.
 
I should think that in most cases, creating your is own business is the most exciting choice, and I'll tell you why :
 
Who never dreamed of bringing his project and ideas to a successful achievement through business creation ?
 
Obviously, such a project doesn't go without risks, you have to do market research, you need to anticipate the various difficulties wich could block your way.
That's why when you set up a business, if you want to succeed, you have to find the one little thing that others don't have, you have to think about business differentiation, somehow you have to create your own market.
Besides, when you create your own business, you can make quick decisions which isn't really the case if you're working for a big firm.
 
Obviously such a task could prove difficult, but the reward could be a thousand times the stake, as we can see, for instance, with the creators of Google who are now billionaires.
 
But you have to keep your feet firmly planted on the ground and to stay prudent because failure could have awful repercussions.
 
So if you're ready, why not make a try ?
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Voila Merci a ceux qui passe par la ;)
 
Si Corran passe parle la merci d'avance ehhe  :jap:


Message édité par corran le 03-01-2005 à 22:56:35
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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:05:55    

iGregg a écrit :

you have to find the litle thing that others don't have dans cette phrase déjà :) .
 
Le reste amuse toi :)


sa phrase est maladroite (un peu) mais grammaticalement correcte ; il n'y a qu'une faute de frappe (un seul t à little)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:19:57    

Je disais cela sur la forme de la phrase pas en matière grammaticale :) .

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:19:57   

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:22:19    

corran a écrit :

sa phrase est maladroite (un peu) mais grammaticalement correcte ; il n'y a qu'une faute de frappe (un seul t à little)


 
Salut corran le dieu vivant de l'anglais ! un sauveur des temps modernes ! :)  
 
Merci pour tout a force je vais progresser de toute facon je suis obligé de progresser ;)  
 
Merci encore  :jap:  
 
 :hello:
 
Par curiosité Corran tu fais des études en lague vivante ?  
 
Chuss ;)


Message édité par marko le 03-01-2005 à 22:27:07
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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:25:10    

Petit insolant va :D , bonne bourre :)

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Marsh Posté le 03-01-2005 à 22:57:09    

j'en ai fait

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