Lettre en Anglais : Besoin de vérification - Aide aux devoirs - Emploi & Etudes
MarshPosté le 04-12-2004 à 17:18:18
Bonjour,
pour un job d'animateur pour enfants aux USA, je me suis fait faire une lettre de recommabdation. Elle m'a été faite en français, je l'ai donc traduite.
Si votre anglais est irréprochable pourriez-vous me signaler les probables incorrections.
nb: je n'ai pas recopié l'original, je demande juste une vérification sur la langue et non sur le fond.
Merci d'avance pour votre temps
Citation :
M.LEDIRLO's reference letters translation
I, undersigned M.LEDIRLO, studies director of XXXX, business and administration school whose diploma awarded the visa of approval of the French Ministry of Education, certify that BOB LEPONGE is a serious and brilliant 2nd year student for the 2004-2005 school year. BOB shows, through his active participation to the associative school life (ASSOC'NAME), an enterprising attitude and a real leadership. During his education, he has to do a work experience abroad at the end of his 2nd year. I recommend you very warmly his candidature. BOB is the second of a 4 children family, so he is quite used to live with other children. Moreover, he has been patrol leader when he was Boy Scout. So I am certain he will efficaciously achieve the responsibilities you will entrust him within COMPANY'NAME.
Marsh Posté le 04-12-2004 à 17:18:18
Bonjour,
pour un job d'animateur pour enfants aux USA, je me suis fait faire une lettre de recommabdation.
Elle m'a été faite en français, je l'ai donc traduite.
Si votre anglais est irréprochable pourriez-vous me signaler les probables incorrections.
nb: je n'ai pas recopié l'original, je demande juste une vérification sur la langue et non sur le fond.
Merci d'avance pour votre temps
M.LEDIRLO's reference letters translation
I, undersigned M.LEDIRLO, studies director of XXXX, business and administration school whose diploma awarded the visa of approval of the French Ministry of Education, certify that BOB LEPONGE is a serious and brilliant 2nd year student for the 2004-2005 school year. BOB shows, through his active participation to the associative school life (ASSOC'NAME), an enterprising attitude and a real leadership. During his education, he has to do a work experience abroad at the end of his 2nd year. I recommend you very warmly his candidature. BOB is the second of a 4 children family, so he is quite used to live with other children. Moreover, he has been patrol leader when he was Boy Scout. So I am certain he will efficaciously achieve the responsibilities you will entrust him within COMPANY'NAME.