Correction anglais.

Marsh Posté le 13-11-2008 à 12:04:26

Bonjours,
J'aurai juste besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes que j'ai pu faire, dans ces textes..

I went to the "auto ecole" (Car school ?!? ^^) today. OMG, I'm not very good, I made 15 wrong answers !! BAD BAD BAD triste_pleure
I have to eat, my mother is not there, i'm just alone !! I don't know what can I eat, i would like to eat a big pizza ! Yeaah.

I finished to read my book for school : "A Dry White Season". It is a very good book, really. Very poignant. After you read it, you will think about a lot of things.. About life, about racism...

Yesterday I went to a party in Montmarte. A friend of mine celebrated his birthday, so he organized a big party. There were lots of people, a good music, much drink and food. It was completely crazy !!

I have to do my homework, but I'm very lazy !! embaras
Every time when I try to begin to work, I find something else to do before, and I stop working. Ohhhh, It's not serious.
Especially that I have a big homework on SES for friday.
It's too hard !

Merci d'avance pour votre correction !

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Marsh Posté le 13-11-2008 à 12:04:26

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Marsh Posté le 13-11-2008 à 12:10:58

Robot-rock a écrit :

Bonjours,
J'aurai juste besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes que j'ai pu faire, dans ces textes..

I went to the "auto ecole" (Car school ?!? ^^) today. OMG, I'm not very good, I made 15 wrong answers !! BAD BAD BAD triste_pleure
I have to eat, my mother is not there, i'm just alone !! I don't know what can I eat, i would like to eat a big pizza ! Yeaah.

I finished to read my book for school : "A Dry White Season". It is a very good book, really. Very poignant. After you read it, you will think about a lot of things.. About life, about racism...

Yesterday I went to a party in Montmarte. A friend of mine celebrated his birthday, so he organized a big party. There were lots of people, a good music, much drink and food. It was completely crazy !!

I have to do my homework, but I'm very lazy !! embaras
Every time when I try to begin to work, I find something else to do before, and I stop working. Ohhhh, It's not serious.
Especially that I have a big homework on SES for friday.
It's too hard !

Merci d'avance pour votre correction !

C'est une glague le "OMG tristre_pleure" ou pas :lol:

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Marsh Posté le 13-11-2008 à 12:41:39

Oups. ^^ OMG : Oh my gosh, et le "triste_pleure", oulaa, c'est un smiley qui n'a pas marché xD

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Marsh Posté le 13-11-2008 à 13:07:13

Robot-rock a écrit :

Bonjours,
J'aurai juste besoin que vous me corrigiez les fautes que j'ai pu faire, dans ces textes..

I went to the "auto ecole" (Car school ?!? ^^) today. OMG, I'm not very good, I made 15 wrong answers !! BAD BAD BAD triste_pleure

I have to eat, my mother is not there, i'm just alone !! I don't know ~~what can I eat~~, i would like to eat a big pizza ! Yeaah.
Il faut choisir: soit c'est une question: What can i eat? soit c'est une affirmative: I don't know what i can eat..

I finished to read my book for school : "A Dry White Season". It is a very good book, really. Very poignant. After you read it, you will think about a lot of things.. About life, about racism...

Yesterday I went to a party in Montmarte. A friend of mine celebrated his birthday, so he organized a big party. There were lots of people, a good music, much drink and food. It was completely crazy !!

I have to do my homework, but I'm very lazy !! embaras
Every time when I try to begin to work, I find something else to do before, and I stop working. Ohhhh, It's not serious.
Especially that I have a big homework on SES for friday.
It's too hard !

Merci d'avance pour votre correction !

Message édité par TAM136 le 13-11-2008 à 13:08:27

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