Bonjour à tous, je dois passer un oral d'anglais en fin de semaine. Je me suis fais un petit texte bateau pour ne pas trop perdre la tete le jour J. Seulement, mon niveau d'anglais étant très faible je recherche une ou plusieurs personnes qui seraient très sympa de bien vouloir me corriger mes fautes si c'est possible ou meme refaire les phrases si elles n'ont pas de sens. Désolé à l'avance des fautes et merci à vous de m'aider.PERSO:  
 
So, my name is ....... I am twenty four year old. I was born three august. I rehearse my BTS this year, in free candidate. I lived in Haute-Normandie, in a town of 2.600 (two thousand and six hundred) inhabitants, which is called R......  I am an owner of a house, with my friend. We have 4 rooms and 800 m ² (eight hundred square meters) of ground. Also, I have a cat «C[quote]araille» and a dog «Espagnou ".  
I obtained my driving license on April 10th of this year. Therefore, I am going to be able to be an employment in the field of the real estate. Finally, at present, I am in search to find a wheelchair.  
I never have been in England. The only times when I left abroad, it was to leave for Spain and for Germany there where is my family.    
 
INTERETS:  
 
I like the dance, I like the dance, and moreover, I have it match 8 years. I like the computing, to surf on the net, the reading. My friend being a fireman, I help fire brigades to prepare all the appearances voluntarily. It occupies when we do not work. Furthermore, I like helping the persons. I need a human contact permanently.  
 
CETTE ANNEE:  
 
This year, I have made of the baby-sitting as work because I did not manage to find an employment in the real-estate. I shall later like working in a real estate agency, as estate manager. I hold property management. Where then, to work in the field of the co-ownership because it is a domain gives a complex that I like particularly. To work in real estate agency is a passion. It is a fascinating, enriching profession, but especially diversifying.  
 
CONCLUSION:  
 
To conclude, after the tests of the BTS, I seek an employment. I will do everything to find an agency estate which accepts me.  
Lastly, I prepare also my voyage in Spain for 1 month in August. I will really like to become bilingual because it is an asset during maintenance of recruiting. As I have a low English level, I will test Spanish. Being a simpler living language but especially because I have opportunity of rather often going to Spain.  
 

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